Thursday, November 10, 2011
Cyberbullying Project Rough Draft
After reviewing our video, I found that we did a good job. However there are some suggestions that i really do need to take in consideration. One is the way we thought we portrayed one aspect of cyberbullying but seemed to create some confusion. We aimed to tell a story in a very small sequence of clips. I was really proud of the way the way we edited the clips within the Mr. Vela interview.
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I liked how it showed all the phones that kids use, i also really liked how the kid walked down the hallway and he faded away from cyberbullying. I liked how you transitioned away from Mr.Vela but he was still in the background talking
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what we liked best was that they personally recorded themselves saying the facts and actions to take against cyber bullying. when they said "stop, block, and drop". we thought this was effective because it gives you a chance to listen to what they say and not just read it off a screen. they told the message good through the interviews. could of changed up the music part way through to break it up. credits were done great and right.
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We think that the exit scene where everything faded to white but felt it was a little too long. But it was effective beacuse it showed the contrast of preventing cyberbullying and the idea of being defeated by it. The text messages and all other forms of text for longer to give people enough time to read it. The role of cyberbully and the cyberbullied was unclear but we liked how it was simple and clear. -Ivy and Brad
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